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waking up somewherewaking up somewhere in seattle  dreams hollowed out like a gold-gutted mountain  yawning with a pillow in my mouth, muting it out  the testing of heavy eyelids  
to see if they can overcome the consistency of a sunrise   
flowering clock stuck on 4:13:43  its cord dangles near an empty outlet  unplugged and waiting for electric love  flickering lights jump from green to orange, and white   
a grainy film of power lines eating up the countryside  the bending and breaking of bittersweet  shells beckoning you to the Oregon coast  where it's 39 degrees with a chance of rain &nb waking up somewhere
by ~SubduedPromises
your moodyou sat and stared  
through the sliver of sun  through eclipsing shade  through the blinds that bind your fragile frame  
creating a crater in a chair  closing an eye at a time to watch your perspective shift  left. right. left. right.  
center. c e n t e r .  c  e  n  t  e  r  .  the moon pulled your eye like a tide  a roomful of irises flashing back black  as smoke sifts up  staining ceilings, teeth, and fingernails  an array of age  from 15 to 20 to 33  a pallet of pills  you pick a blue to match your mood
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sobre portugalover an océano  above Portuguese people  placed in front of that foreign photographed face  barefoot Segovian niños play futbol down the streets  
the tiendas slowly shut down for their midday break  echoing clacks from a nearby carriage  
reverberate back off the Alcázar castle walls  where the beheading of statues occurred  once perfect like a Roman  they corrode the gothic cathedral stairs  and white windmills on a hillside taunt my Don Quixote  the pick-pocketing gypsies danced outside the Roman aqueduct  selling sentiments and rosemary  the sounds of Friday n sobre portugal
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salt and limesShe was a bent ended bottle rocket  yet every night the neon draws her in like a moth  
a porcelain halo outlining her flaws  she starts slurring her Dylan drawl  the bartender marks a calendar counting out a comatose life  burning nights on unfamiliar floors  these days her face ages like a tree  
each wrinkle a ring  we cut her down to know  she was born on a bull’s-eye salt and limes
by ~SubduedPromises
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waking up somewhere

Wed Oct 21, 2009, 6:52 PM
[l i f e]
I'm a sophomore at Bemidji State.
Just trying to get by.
Deleted my facebook and myspace because I hate how I waste so much of my life on a computer, keeping up with other people's lives.
I should only be keeping up with my close friends and family, because really in life, they're all that really matter right?

Still with the same guy and
we radiate more than the goddamn sun.


[p h o t o g r a p h y]
I still have a giant stack of photos I need to scan and edit whenever I'm home next :/
Which will be in a month, BUT I don't have photoshop on my new laptop so I'll have to figure something out.


[w r i t i n g]
I'm currently enrolled in a Writing Poetry class so that's why I have so many new submissions in that genre.
I soon hope to be inspired by the new things in my life.


[p a g e v i e w s]
thank you 16,398

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  • Listening to: Paul Simon
  • Reading: Smashed

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  • Interests: poetry & photography & music
  • Favourite movie: Garden State & Breakfast at Tiffanys
  • Favourite band or musician: Regina Spektor & Bright Eyes & Joshua Radin
  • Favourite genre of music: Indie & Folk
  • Favourite poet or writer: Sylvia Plath & ConorOberst
  • Personal Quote: “The worst enemy to creativity is self doubt.”
  • Tools of the Trade: Canon Rebel ( f i l m )

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~justagirl12343 Nov 7, 2009, 3:18:33 PM
you have an epic icon

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~therapeutic-smiles May 21, 2009, 9:28:14 PM
Wow, I cannot believe that you go to BSU! I know tons of people there and I'll be transferring there from the cities next year. I used to be OBSESSED with Draw.Freeze.Collape.Breathe. You are a fantastic artist!
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~SubduedPromises Jun 2, 2009, 3:13:36 PM
Thanks.
I love the campus and the college.
Maybe I will see you around campus or maybe even have a class with you.
Where are you living? on campus?

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~therapeutic-smiles May 21, 2009, 9:27:29 PM
Wow, I cannot believe that you go to BSU! I know tons of people there and I'll be transferring there from the cities next year. I used to be OBSESSED with Draw.Freeze.Collape.Breathe. You are a fantastic artist!
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*Violator3 Jan 26, 2009, 7:32:55 AM
:heart:

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*delirium77 Jan 18, 2009, 3:29:31 PM
hi!thank you very much for adding my work to your favs,i really appreciate that from you:thanks:
hope you have a great day!:wave:

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~Angel-Soul Oct 21, 2008, 2:04:13 PM
Thanks alot for the support =) :thanks:

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~Sunhorde Sep 12, 2008, 8:47:55 PM
Thanks for the fav. :)

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