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I’ve spent more mornings waking up blaming myself then falling asleep praying to God.
Enough said.
I wrote my confessions on a colony of balloons and gave it up to Christ.
Looking up after releasing, hoping on it’s arrival-
The child inside replied,
“Lord, just let the wind blow me over into tomorrow."
Bandit eyes and a smile I stole from a 10 year old girl.
Arms flung; head screaming skyward
“This will be the end of me.”
We’ll both fight back the fact I don’t mean a thing and lack communication.
I’m inconsistent, despondent, with the emotion of a mannequin.
Hallelujah! I’m on a tight wire balancing between fiction and ferocity.
I’m facing the lions den and this time I won’t be saved merely out of mercy.
Gasps emerge from the mouths of the crowd really wishing to witness a m i r a c l e
The last look I gave before I made eyelids crash into ocean currents - was one of desperation.
Closing of clouds averted nervous sights into the sky.
An hour away from a hurricane.
Then I’ll become a silhouette.
I’ll fade into infinity.
I was once held like a child letting go of their balloons
don’t
l e t
g o
Enough said.
I wrote my confessions on a colony of balloons and gave it up to Christ.
Looking up after releasing, hoping on it’s arrival-
The child inside replied,
“Lord, just let the wind blow me over into tomorrow."
Bandit eyes and a smile I stole from a 10 year old girl.
Arms flung; head screaming skyward
“This will be the end of me.”
We’ll both fight back the fact I don’t mean a thing and lack communication.
I’m inconsistent, despondent, with the emotion of a mannequin.
Hallelujah! I’m on a tight wire balancing between fiction and ferocity.
I’m facing the lions den and this time I won’t be saved merely out of mercy.
Gasps emerge from the mouths of the crowd really wishing to witness a m i r a c l e
The last look I gave before I made eyelids crash into ocean currents - was one of desperation.
Closing of clouds averted nervous sights into the sky.
An hour away from a hurricane.
Then I’ll become a silhouette.
I’ll fade into infinity.
I was once held like a child letting go of their balloons
don’t
l e t
g o
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This is a self portrait writing.
I took some older lines from poems where I write about myself and made it into a mega poem.
SO-you might remember reading some lines.
yeah.
I took some older lines from poems where I write about myself and made it into a mega poem.
SO-you might remember reading some lines.
yeah.
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this one was beautifully wrote.
what was the inspiration behind this
one?
the impermanence of all things?
what was the inspiration behind this
one?
the impermanence of all things?