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Just brush it off your shoulders,
Girl, you’ll only wake up looking older.
You’re still so blind and foolish
Lay the blame on the poor boy.
I’m sure he'll think this thoroughly,
As sweat beads down across his face,
Unraveling under all the stress,
"Now lets put you to the test."
He’s falling over "guilt trips"
Barely hanging onto a look into tomorrow,
Smile flickers like a light switch (Up and ....
Goes off as fast as it goes on.

Nothing seems to stop your one girl wrecking machine.
Touch and taste of her deadly weapon,
Lethal glamour in her kiss
Yet keeps pushing on her luck
When silence falls upon your lips...
Lures you farther in with spoken words of “safe” and “security”
Snow white was innocent,
Kid, she is just bad news.
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Innocence was Snow White, Shes Just Bad News
or
Miss Scarlet-Candlestick-Library is what killed him.

Yeah I dont know if its done and its different from the rest.
Maybe Ill scrap it
add on
or just let it be.
:shrug:
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:iconpawprntsonmyheart:
You remind me of Fall Out Boy lyrics... Just the way its written. :aww:
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~SubduedPromises May 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhh that is quite a compliment saying i write like pete. His lyrics are amazinggggg!
So thank you so much. You made me happy. :glomp: :heart: !!!
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:iconpawprntsonmyheart:
No prob. :lol: I love FOB. They're so awesome.
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:iconblack-pen:
Oh this is so great Hanners; I think one of my favorites of yours. I absolutely love the ide (so wishing I had thought of "Miss Scarlet-Candlestick-Library.") Brillianto!
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~SubduedPromises Apr 30, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
AshiePoo Thank you! :glomp:!
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~SubduedPromises Apr 30, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Oh AshhhhhhhiePOO! :heart:!
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:iconpeachyyy:
I like this very much! the title = :heart:
and.. it kind of reminded me of some white stripes song... nevermind :)
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~SubduedPromises Apr 23, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for taking a look at my poetry :) :heart:
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:iconpeachyyy:
no problem... and the others are interesting... I should take some more time to go through all of it
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~brokendancer Mar 31, 2006  Student Photographer
bravo.

i like it much.
much indeed.
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