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December 11, 2005
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By the end of the week-
we're packed and ready to leave this God forsaken town.
                                                                  
Escaping through the backdoor.

No clues or trace of us will get left behind.
Marked maps, no money for gas,
we hit the highways.
Accelerate, brake,
going from state to state.
                                  Key in ignition,
                                  What's in store 40 miles from here?
                                  Our destination?
                                  An uncommon break in the lines?
And we're what is called a "Runaway".
I think it's called a "Getaway".
               Matching descriptions of the profiled kids on the milk carton.
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i just started writing and this came out in like 30 minutes.
And i just thought of the title off the top of my head.
Some of it kinda reminds me of Postal Service style. Maybe thats just me. I dont know.
Hope you enjoy.
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:iconxcatchmyfallx:
I like the entire poem, but I really like how you ended it. ;)
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~SubduedPromises Jan 15, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. And thank you for the add. I'll have to check out your gallery. :heart:
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:iconsoutherngothgal:
Sometimes i think we all need a vacation from not only are hometowns, but our lives. If only leaving were so easy...
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~SubduedPromises Dec 24, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
so true. thanks for checking out my stuff.
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:iconsoutherngothgal:
your welcome.
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:iconblack-pen:
I do also like the theme Hanners my dear. It's a quick story. I can never write like that but I love to read them. It's like a mini-book I remember for always. I'm much a fan of the fourth stanza [No clues or....]
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[Where do I get to fit into "the favourites?"]
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~SubduedPromises Dec 12, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
:confused: :heart:
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:iconyournotagoodbye:
Accelerate, brake,
going from state to state.
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favorite.
youre my favorite.
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~SubduedPromises Dec 12, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
No. Youre my favorite.
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