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One SecondDear You,

Yes, I know what you're thinking:

"There's that creepy girl again,
the one that stares at me all day
and gets all nervous when I'm around."

But I have a lot to tell you,
even if you're not reading this,
so just bear with me.

You- yes, you- are ruining my life.

I used to be so content with myself,
convinced that love was pointless
and dating people is just a hassle.

I knew that looks didn't matter,
that I should look out for myself
and not care what other people think.

What have you done with that girl?

I'm wasting all my time on you,
and I know that, but I can't stop.

I worked so hard on that project,
hoping it would be per

Cherry Blossom TreeBlack curly hair
Black asphalt
Black pants, shirt & shoes

What's all this worth?

To see the sun beaming into
Your brown eyes
And bright smile

I get that for free!

'Cause between you and me,
We're meant to be
Only our eyes can see
......Us
Together for eternity.

You're more than a friend to me
You're my lover
Sitting under that tree

Where the cherry blossom petals
Blew into infinity..... :-)

Dark and DangerousDark and dangerous
Your smile it haunts me
Your voice it kills me
When we first met we became easily friends
My heart raced as we learned more of each other
But when you stopped noticing me
My love grew deeper
And my cheeks turned red when thought about you
So now i have one last chance to say this to you
I love you
But you can not love me back

Her passionate flameHer flames burn passionately
Like a sparkle from a
Royal jewel
So beautiful

dysmorphic weatherspring came late this year
snow arrived along with april
and i found myself wondering
if this was what the whole year would be like
it wouldn't surprise me
given the recent events
pathetic fallacy and all that

Single FlameShattered and broken apart
I watch you fall apart once again
You don't scream, but i see your pain

I stand by your side over and over again
Just to watch you hurt
She took your heart and tour it apart,
Just to see you cry

She wouldn't help you, she doesn't care
She doesn't even feel you there.
All alone just let her go

Let me guide you through the night and show you the light
For I love you so, but you didn't notice me that summer day.
Now I'm standing here all alone.

Why didn't you let her go,
Why didn't I let you go.
I loved you so, but your gone
For she killed you

I'm all alone, just wondering why you wouldn't let go
I just wait every

unfwould you push me away if i tried to kiss you

because you know i so badly want to

and if you would just open your heart to me

you’d find out my lips are warmer than tea

it’s too hard to try and rhyme this line

so let’s get close and simply intertwine

Upon the Final NotesA dance is a dance, a twirl in the night
Begging for a reason, kindling to the flame.
Friendly words whisper to friendly ears,
Of times done and gone.
Lips smile, brushing a soft shoulder,
Begging the heart to make a mistake.
Only will remains, struggling,
Just to persevere.

UnrequitedShe falls in love with him twice a day
and hates him twice as much by night
The starlight makes ribbons of her hair
which is more than he will ever do
And the breeze whispers sweet nothings in her ear
which is more than he will ever say
Her hands are technicolour
and her knees are made of iron
but only in daylight
when he is the sun
And then he sets
and the grass is sprayed with frost
and she can no longer stay outside
without worrying about hypothermia
He’s a desert
and she’s caught in the sand
She falls in love with him twice a day
and hates him twice as much at night

Give Me Pain.Put a gun to my head,

I'll help you pull the trigger.

All ounce of self love

Vanished with your memory.

Stab me in the back,

I'll beg you to push harder.

Any last hope of happiness

Disappeared with your presence.

To be hurt by you

Would be a pure blessing.

Though, nothing less than

An excuse to see you one last time.

TnM~-No estas Sola,Marie...

Iba caminando,completamente perdida en mis Pensamientos...
Cada vez que daba un paso,las hojas secas del paisaje Otoñal crujían,
Y el suave silbido del viento, movía tiernamente las pocas hojas anaranjadas de los miles de arboles...
Y ahí estaba yo,
Recordando tristemente ese Día...
Ese Día,
Que Odiare hasta el Fin de mis Días...
Y,
Empezó como el Mejor de mi Vida,
Que
Termino siendo el Peor,
Toda un Pesadilla,que parecía que no iba a terminar...
Y no termina,jamas...
A partir de que Él se fue...
Toda la Pesadilla comenzó,
El Cielo se volvió gris,
Todo estaba Oscuro y sin vida,
Yo,
Jamas volví a ser la misma...
Ni lo volveré a ser,
Ya no soy esa Chica a la que todos Conocían y querían,
Ya no soy esa Chica ale

Our Afternoon of Dancing RainWalking home alone, as usual,
Phone brightening with your name
Drops fall on the illuminated screen
And you say it’s raining too
Giggling to myself and blushing here and there
Picking up the pace or slowing down,
I rather don’t care for either
Phone vibrates again once more,
And you ask for this dance,
But how I say, thumbs vigorously at work
Pretend, a simple answer,
So I walk home alone still true,
Only now spinning in a happy lil’ tune
As we go about dancing in the rain

Hetalia UsUk Fanfiction Teaser."Dear Arthur,
Are you in the mood for a romantic fuck tonight? I hope so, because when you get home from work, I'll be hiding, and you must find three envelopes that contain clues about my whereabouts. The first clue will be on top of the fridge, each clue will instruct you on what to do. Pay special attention to the last clue. It tells you exactly what I want you to do to me after you find me. But before you look for me, be sure to lube your dick and ass. I want you to be naked, hot, and ready when you find me. I'm so horny from thinking about how much I want to spend the night being deep inside you that my dick is so hard. Know that I'll be

Let me tell you a storyLet me tell you a story about a girl and a boy
I fell in love with my best friend
When he's around
I feel nothing but joy

You can tell that I'm afraid of what this might do
Cause we have such
an amazing friendship
That I don't want to lose

Does he know that I love him, or is he not aware?
Does he know that it breaks my heart to see him cry
He's the smile on my face
And I'm not going anywhere

I'm here to see him smile
I'm here to make him happy,
I'm here to hear him laugh
I've been wanting to tell him this for a long while

But I have already heard him say
In passing conversation
He doesn't like me quite like that
Not that I ever asked h

firstloveand if i am to dream of you

and only you,

and if i am to see you -

and only you –

in my mind’s eye…

Then, perhaps, I will cave to the demands that they make of us,

the writers, artists, poets,

we amateurs especially, we, the fledglings;

so that I might write of you:

the faint freckles I envision racing across your smiling face,

hair falling down across your eyes before you brush it halfheartedly away,

the glow of spirit indescribable like a fire in those very eyes,

your curving lips.

If I were honest with myself, I would write it, say it,

that thing I discovered,

a most objective fact – and honestly, it

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Making Plans Turn to Fiction

by ~SubduedPromises, Dec 11, 2005, 1:45:55 PM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

By the end of the week-
we're packed and ready to leave this God forsaken town.

Escaping through the backdoor.

No clues or trace of us will get left behind.
Marked maps, no money for gas,
we hit the highways.
Accelerate, brake,
going from state to state.
                                  Key in ignition,
                                  What's in store 40 miles from here?
                                  Our destination?
                                  An uncommon break in the lines?
And we're what is called a "Runaway".
I think it's called a "Getaway".
               Matching descriptions of the profiled kids on the milk carton.

Making Plans Turn to Fictionby ~SubduedPromises

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

©2005-2013 ~SubduedPromises

i just started writing and this came out in like 30 minutes.
And i just thought of the title off the top of my head.
Some of it kinda reminds me of Postal Service style. Maybe thats just me. I dont know.
Hope you enjoy.

~xCatchMyFallx Jan 15, 2006

I like the entire poem, but I really like how you ended it.

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~SubduedPromises Jan 15, 2006 Hobbyist Writer

Thanks. And thank you for the add. I'll have to check out your gallery.

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~SouthernGothGal Dec 23, 2005 Writer

Sometimes i think we all need a vacation from not only are hometowns, but our lives. If only leaving were so easy...

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~SubduedPromises Dec 24, 2005 Hobbyist Writer

so true. thanks for checking out my stuff.

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~SouthernGothGal Dec 28, 2005 Writer

your welcome.

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~ANNABELLESTAR Dec 14, 2005

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~black-pen Dec 12, 2005

I do also like the theme Hanners my dear. It's a quick story. I can never write like that but I love to read them. It's like a mini-book I remember for always. I'm much a fan of the fourth stanza [No clues or....]

[Where do I get to fit into "the favourites?"]

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~SubduedPromises Dec 12, 2005 Hobbyist Writer

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~yournotagoodbye Dec 12, 2005

Accelerate, brake,
going from state to state.

favorite.
youre my favorite.

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~SubduedPromises Dec 12, 2005 Hobbyist Writer

No. Youre my favorite.

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