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Unmade bedsheets, long blank stares
Youre an air inhaler, speechless lips
Racing minds, racing hearts
Smeared lipstick, untidy hair
Unstable, unsure
Expressional, hopeful
Inexperienced, innocent
Vulnerable, no control
Rushing Glamour, imperfection
                                                  You call it pressure
                                                    I call you "easy"
                                                 So save the candles.
yeah just take a wild guess.
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:omg: I love it very much. the last 3,4 lines really tie it together so well. Okay I've now read it through twice more and im still in awe of the last lines. Very nice.
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SubduedPromises Sep 17, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
oh thank you! :hug:
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:iconflatrabbitfan:
god your so beautiful
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:iconbeautifullyflawed09:
i simply love this :heart:

amazing flow, amazing choice of words, amazing emotion
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SubduedPromises Aug 25, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! :)
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:iconyournotagoodbye:
iloveit!!:heart:
by the way, nice topic :P
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SubduedPromises Aug 25, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! i know but if you think about...theres alot of people that can relate.
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yeah,no doubt there are...
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:iconeiros:
i love the way it feels like your just DUMPING part of yourself into what you write!
its good
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