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Unmade bedsheets, long blank stares
Youre an air inhaler, speechless lips
Racing minds, racing hearts
Smeared lipstick, untidy hair
Unstable, unsure
Expressional, hopeful
Inexperienced, innocent
Vulnerable, no control
Rushing Glamour, imperfection
                                                  You call it pressure
                                                    I call you "easy"
                                                 So save the candles.
yeah just take a wild guess.
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black-pen Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2005
:omg: I love it very much. the last 3,4 lines really tie it together so well. Okay I've now read it through twice more and im still in awe of the last lines. Very nice.
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SubduedPromises Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
oh thank you! :hug:
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flatrabbitfan Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2005
god your so beautiful
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beautifullyflawed09 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2005
i simply love this :heart:

amazing flow, amazing choice of words, amazing emotion
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SubduedPromises Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! :)
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beautifullyflawed09 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2005
your welcome :)
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2005
iloveit!!:heart:
by the way, nice topic :P
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SubduedPromises Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! i know but if you think about...theres alot of people that can relate.
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yournotagoodbye Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2005
yeah,no doubt there are...
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Eiros Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2005
i love the way it feels like your just DUMPING part of yourself into what you write!
its good
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