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March 21, 2006
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Today I caught myself being daring
Leaning in dangerously too far
How I got the courage too....
So lets take this all the way
Or until we both freeze up
Glued, fixed in a dead on stare.
"You make me so nervous", it slipped right out i swear.
                                               Lets see whos "beat" can win this race.
                                               At the moment were both ahead of the tempo.
                                                            Only trailing off by measures
                       And I never got the chance and time to say

"Ohhh...I am somewhere else when Im with you."
At my melting point
(Your eyes burn through me so gently)
Inches away, I gracefully bowed down
Only inches away, I could feel you.
                           Could you help me pick the nerves off from my shoulders?
                      This awkward air inbetween us couldnt kill me any slower.
Play a gentle slow motion across my lips.
Close your eyes and make a wish.
Lets linger here for a few seconds more.
Act as if weve done this all before.

In our dreams, in our minds weve waited this out and held it all in.
About a boy and a moment in time at a place that will be kept away like one big secret.
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About a boy and a moment in time at a place that will be kept away like one big secret.
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Oh Hanners - I do believe I know that boy (rolls eyes.) And I completely love the italics part about music [it's the band in you.]
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~SubduedPromises Apr 27, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Yes BandGeeks! I know that boy too (date)
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~SubduedPromises Mar 24, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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I like this. I can feel the tension in the air. Brava. :clap:
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~SubduedPromises Mar 23, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Oh thanks :) :hug:
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~silentscreams357 Mar 22, 2006   Photographer
man ur suuuper good.
i :heart: this one!
and you too!
latah!
-kayla
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~SubduedPromises Mar 22, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Thanks Kayla! Lufffff you! :blowkiss:
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About a boy and a moment in time at a place that will be kept away like one big secret.
I love that.
:heart:
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~SubduedPromises Mar 22, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks Jocy! :glomp:
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